Wording

42e04dac · Bob Mottram · 46db3d58 · 42e04dac · 42e04dac
Commit 42e04dac authored 7 years ago by Bob Mottram
--- a/doc/EN/release3.org
+++ b/doc/EN/release3.org
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Freedombone version 3 is based on Debian 9 (Stretch). It was released in July 20
 * Faster initial setup
 * More [[./apps.html][installable apps]], including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb
 * Automated [[https://github.com/hardenedlinux/STIG-4-Debian][security tests]]
- * Improved XMPP configuration for better support of the [[https://conversations.im][Conversations]] app
+ * Improved XMPP configuration for support of the [[https://conversations.im][Conversations]] app features
 * Improved blocking controls for a better federated network experience
 * Uses [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA][elliptic curve]] based GPG keys for better performance on low power single board computers
 * Pre-downloaded repos distributed within images for faster and more autonomous app installs

--- a/website/EN/release3.html
+++ b/website/EN/release3.html
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
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+<!-- 2017-06-30 Fri 22:06 -->
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@@ -260,15 +260,15 @@ Freedombone version 3 is based on Debian 9 (Stretch). It was released in July 20
 <li>Faster initial setup</li>
 <li>More <a href="./apps.html">installable apps</a>, including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb</li>
 <li>Automated <a href="https://github.com/hardenedlinux/STIG-4-Debian">security tests</a></li>
-<li>Improved XMPP configuration for better support of the <a href="https://conversations.im">Conversations</a> app</li>
+<li>Improved XMPP configuration for support of the <a href="https://conversations.im">Conversations</a> app features</li>
 <li>Improved blocking controls for a better federated network experience</li>
 <li>Uses <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA">elliptic curve</a> based GPG keys for better performance on low power single board computers</li>
 <li>Pre-downloaded repos distributed within images for faster and more autonomous app installs</li>
 </ul>

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-<h2 id="org280a067">Installation</h2>
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+<div id="outline-container-org9203a33" class="outline-2">
+<h2 id="org9203a33">Installation</h2>
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 <p>
 The simplest way to install is from a pre-made disk image. Images can be <a href="https://freedombone.net/downloads/v3">downloaded here</a>. You will need to have previously obtained a domain name and have a dynamic DNS account somewhere.
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@@ -324,9 +324,9 @@ More detailed installation instructions are linked from <a href="./index.html">t
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-<h2 id="org03c9313">Upgrading from a previous install</h2>
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+<h2 id="orgf8d289a">Upgrading from a previous install</h2>
+<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-orgf8d289a">
 <p>
 To upgrade from the Debian Jessie version first create a master keydrive. Go to the <b>Administrator control panel</b> and select <b>Backup and restore</b> then <b>Backup GPG key to USB (master keydrive)</b>. Insert a LUKS encrypted USB drive. When that is done Create a full backup by selecting <b>Backup data to USB drive</b> and using another LUKS encrypted USB drive.
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