More concise

29c557c6 · Bob Mottram · 75bbef16 · 29c557c6 · 29c557c6
Commit 29c557c6 authored 7 years ago by Bob Mottram
--- a/doc/EN/release3.org
+++ b/doc/EN/release3.org
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ The internet may still be mostly in the clutches of a few giant megacorporations
 Freedombone version 3 is based on Debian 9 (Stretch). It was released in July 2017 and includes:

 * Faster initial setup
- * More [[./apps.html][installable apps]] than the previous release, including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb
+ * More [[./apps.html][installable apps]], including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb
 * Automated [[https://github.com/hardenedlinux/STIG-4-Debian][security tests]]
- * Improved XMPP configuration to support all of the XEPs needed by the [[https://conversations.im][Conversations]] app
- * Improved account and domain blocking controls for GNU Social and PostActiv for a better federated network experience
- * Uses [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA][elliptic curve]] based GPG keys by default for better performance on low power single board computers
+ * Improved XMPP configuration to support the XEPs needed by the [[https://conversations.im][Conversations]] app
+ * Improved blocking controls for a better federated network experience
+ * Uses [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA][elliptic curve]] based GPG keys for better performance on low power single board computers
 * Pre-downloaded repos distributed within images for faster and more autonomous app installs

 * Installation

--- a/website/EN/release3.html
+++ b/website/EN/release3.html
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-strict.dtd">
 <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" lang="en" xml:lang="en">
 <head>
-<!-- 2017-06-30 Fri 21:55 -->
+<!-- 2017-06-30 Fri 22:01 -->
 <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html;charset=utf-8" />
 <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1" />
 <title></title>
@@ -258,17 +258,17 @@ Freedombone version 3 is based on Debian 9 (Stretch). It was released in July 20

 <ul class="org-ul">
 <li>Faster initial setup</li>
-<li>More <a href="./apps.html">installable apps</a> than the previous release, including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb</li>
+<li>More <a href="./apps.html">installable apps</a>, including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb</li>
 <li>Automated <a href="https://github.com/hardenedlinux/STIG-4-Debian">security tests</a></li>
-<li>Improved XMPP configuration to support all of the XEPs needed by the <a href="https://conversations.im">Conversations</a> app</li>
-<li>Improved account and domain blocking controls for GNU Social and PostActiv for a better federated network experience</li>
-<li>Uses <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA">elliptic curve</a> based GPG keys by default for better performance on low power single board computers</li>
+<li>Improved XMPP configuration to support the XEPs needed by the <a href="https://conversations.im">Conversations</a> app</li>
+<li>Improved blocking controls for a better federated network experience</li>
+<li>Uses <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA">elliptic curve</a> based GPG keys for better performance on low power single board computers</li>
 <li>Pre-downloaded repos distributed within images for faster and more autonomous app installs</li>
 </ul>

-<div id="outline-container-orgdee8d2c" class="outline-2">
-<h2 id="orgdee8d2c">Installation</h2>
-<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-orgdee8d2c">
+<div id="outline-container-org7005011" class="outline-2">
+<h2 id="org7005011">Installation</h2>
+<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-org7005011">
 <p>
 The simplest way to install is from a pre-made disk image. Images can be <a href="https://freedombone.net/downloads/v3">downloaded here</a>. You will need to have previously obtained a domain name and have a dynamic DNS account somewhere.
 </p>
@@ -324,9 +324,9 @@ More detailed installation instructions are linked from <a href="./index.html">t
 </div>
 </div>

-<div id="outline-container-org6f9c386" class="outline-2">
-<h2 id="org6f9c386">Upgrading from a previous install</h2>
-<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-org6f9c386">
+<div id="outline-container-org3c6b423" class="outline-2">
+<h2 id="org3c6b423">Upgrading from a previous install</h2>
+<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-org3c6b423">
 <p>
 To upgrade from the Debian Jessie version first create a master keydrive. Go to the <b>Administrator control panel</b> and select <b>Backup and restore</b> then <b>Backup GPG key to USB (master keydrive)</b>. Insert a LUKS encrypted USB drive. When that is done Create a full backup by selecting <b>Backup data to USB drive</b> and using another LUKS encrypted USB drive.
 </p>