Wording

01e07b3d · Bob Mottram · 8c020249 · 01e07b3d · 01e07b3d
Commit 01e07b3d authored 6 years ago by Bob Mottram
--- a/doc/EN/index.org
+++ b/doc/EN/index.org
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 #+BEGIN_CENTER
 [[file:images/logo.png]]
 #+END_CENTER
-So you want to run your own internet services? Email, chat, VoIP, web sites, file synchronisation, wikis, blogs, social networks, media hosting, backups, VPN. Freedombone enables you to do all of that in a self-hosted way, where you keep control of your data and it resides in your own home.
+So you want to run your own internet services? Email, chat, VoIP, web sites, file synchronisation, wikis, blogs, social networks, media hosting, backups, VPN. Freedombone is a home server system which enables you to self-host all of these things in a manner where you keep control of your data and it resides in your own home.

 You can run Freedombone on an old laptop or a single board computer. See the [[./installmethods.html][list of installation methods]]. You can also use it to [[./mesh.html][set up a mesh network]] in your local area.


--- a/website/EN/index.html
+++ b/website/EN/index.html
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" lang="en" xml:lang="en">
 <head>
 <title></title>
-<!-- 2018-04-11 Wed 20:31 -->
+<!-- 2018-04-11 Wed 20:34 -->
 <meta  http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html;charset=utf-8" />
 <meta  name="generator" content="Org-mode" />
 <meta  name="author" content="Bob Mottram" />
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ for the JavaScript code in this tag.
 </div>
 </div>
 <p>
-So you want to run your own internet services? Email, chat, VoIP, web sites, file synchronisation, wikis, blogs, social networks, media hosting, backups, VPN. Freedombone enables you to do all of that in a self-hosted way, where you keep control of your data and it resides in your own home.
+So you want to run your own internet services? Email, chat, VoIP, web sites, file synchronisation, wikis, blogs, social networks, media hosting, backups, VPN. Freedombone is a home server system which enables you to self-host all of these things in a manner where you keep control of your data and it resides in your own home.
 </p>

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