From 46db3d583bda2866d55656b2ae32716b36c7c8a0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bob Mottram <bob@freedombone.net> Date: Fri, 30 Jun 2017 22:05:24 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Wording --- doc/EN/release3.org | 2 +- website/EN/release3.html | 16 ++++++++-------- 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/EN/release3.org b/doc/EN/release3.org index ff8f7cb4b..214b24ecf 100644 --- a/doc/EN/release3.org +++ b/doc/EN/release3.org @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Freedombone version 3 is based on Debian 9 (Stretch). It was released in July 20 * Faster initial setup * More [[./apps.html][installable apps]], including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb * Automated [[https://github.com/hardenedlinux/STIG-4-Debian][security tests]] - * Improved XMPP configuration to support the XEPs needed by the [[https://conversations.im][Conversations]] app + * Improved XMPP configuration for better support of the [[https://conversations.im][Conversations]] app * Improved blocking controls for a better federated network experience * Uses [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA][elliptic curve]] based GPG keys for better performance on low power single board computers * Pre-downloaded repos distributed within images for faster and more autonomous app installs diff --git a/website/EN/release3.html b/website/EN/release3.html index 90b1e5364..830f49d61 100644 --- a/website/EN/release3.html +++ b/website/EN/release3.html @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-strict.dtd"> <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" lang="en" xml:lang="en"> <head> -<!-- 2017-06-30 Fri 22:01 --> +<!-- 2017-06-30 Fri 22:05 --> <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html;charset=utf-8" /> <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1" /> <title></title> @@ -260,15 +260,15 @@ Freedombone version 3 is based on Debian 9 (Stretch). It was released in July 20 <li>Faster initial setup</li> <li>More <a href="./apps.html">installable apps</a>, including CryptPad, Koel, NextCloud, PostActiv, Friendica and Matrix/RiotWeb</li> <li>Automated <a href="https://github.com/hardenedlinux/STIG-4-Debian">security tests</a></li> -<li>Improved XMPP configuration to support the XEPs needed by the <a href="https://conversations.im">Conversations</a> app</li> +<li>Improved XMPP configuration for better support of the <a href="https://conversations.im">Conversations</a> app</li> <li>Improved blocking controls for a better federated network experience</li> <li>Uses <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EdDSA">elliptic curve</a> based GPG keys for better performance on low power single board computers</li> <li>Pre-downloaded repos distributed within images for faster and more autonomous app installs</li> </ul> -<div id="outline-container-org7005011" class="outline-2"> -<h2 id="org7005011">Installation</h2> -<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-org7005011"> +<div id="outline-container-org280a067" class="outline-2"> +<h2 id="org280a067">Installation</h2> +<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-org280a067"> <p> The simplest way to install is from a pre-made disk image. Images can be <a href="https://freedombone.net/downloads/v3">downloaded here</a>. You will need to have previously obtained a domain name and have a dynamic DNS account somewhere. </p> @@ -324,9 +324,9 @@ More detailed installation instructions are linked from <a href="./index.html">t </div> </div> -<div id="outline-container-org3c6b423" class="outline-2"> -<h2 id="org3c6b423">Upgrading from a previous install</h2> -<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-org3c6b423"> +<div id="outline-container-org03c9313" class="outline-2"> +<h2 id="org03c9313">Upgrading from a previous install</h2> +<div class="outline-text-2" id="text-org03c9313"> <p> To upgrade from the Debian Jessie version first create a master keydrive. Go to the <b>Administrator control panel</b> and select <b>Backup and restore</b> then <b>Backup GPG key to USB (master keydrive)</b>. Insert a LUKS encrypted USB drive. When that is done Create a full backup by selecting <b>Backup data to USB drive</b> and using another LUKS encrypted USB drive. </p> -- GitLab