From 360a124d6e86f8f0407ce78286361a0044033142 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bob Mottram <bob@freedombone.net> Date: Tue, 20 Nov 2018 10:14:52 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Wording --- doc/EN/apps.org | 6 +++--- website/EN/apps.html | 8 ++++---- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/EN/apps.org b/doc/EN/apps.org index f73978c66..f8656df39 100644 --- a/doc/EN/apps.org +++ b/doc/EN/apps.org @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ This system comes in three versions: - * Standard server version, which is intended for the ordinary internet using conventional domain names - * /Onion only/ server version which uses onion addresses. No need for a domain name or port forwarding - * [[./mesh.html][Mesh peer/client version]] intended for off-grid autonomous operation, separate from the internet + * Standard server version: for the ordinary internet using conventional domain names + * /Onion only/ server version: uses onion addresses. Doesn't need a domain name or port forwarding + * [[./mesh.html][Mesh peer/client version]]: off-grid autonomous operation, separate from the internet. No servers. * Server apps These apps are available on all server versions of the system, either via clearnet or onion addresses. diff --git a/website/EN/apps.html b/website/EN/apps.html index 62e3690c2..48c0e5bc2 100644 --- a/website/EN/apps.html +++ b/website/EN/apps.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" lang="en" xml:lang="en"> <head> <title>Freedombone</title> -<!-- 2018-11-20 Tue 10:11 --> +<!-- 2018-11-20 Tue 10:14 --> <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html;charset=utf-8" /> <meta name="generator" content="Org-mode" /> <meta name="author" content="Bob Mottram" /> @@ -156,11 +156,11 @@ This system comes in three versions: </p> <ul class="org-ul"> -<li>Standard server version, which is intended for the ordinary internet using conventional domain names +<li>Standard server version: for the ordinary internet using conventional domain names </li> -<li><i>Onion only</i> server version which uses onion addresses. No need for a domain name or port forwarding +<li><i>Onion only</i> server version: uses onion addresses. Doesn't need a domain name or port forwarding </li> -<li><a href="./mesh.html">Mesh peer/client version</a> intended for off-grid autonomous operation, separate from the internet +<li><a href="./mesh.html">Mesh peer/client version</a>: off-grid autonomous operation, separate from the internet. No servers. </li> </ul> <div id="outline-container-sec-1" class="outline-2"> -- GitLab